第3次写作！！
Read the following passage，I th
ink many problems should be discussed in paragraph six
, many(.Many) people have felt that if they are rich they could buy happiness for themselves .
however (However)author says that steady improvements in the economy are not accompanied by a steady increase in people’s assessments of their own happiness. Why Money doesn't always bring happiness? Author only mentions that people become less
satisfid（satisfied） over time with a given level of income in the article. but(But) in my
a(a 删去) opinion economic
growing(growth) brings wealth and it also brings strong competition.
people(People) have
Under(Under删去) great pressure. So you can not buy happiness.
?
Author rehearses many of (of删去)examples to explain the typical(topic). First, happy people like themselves. Second, they can feel personal control .third(Third) happy people are usually optimistic .fourth(Fourth) happy people tend to be extroverted.
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