染雾澳洲留学申请书 篇一：追寻梦想的开始
尊敬的澳洲留学委员会：
我写信是希望能够获得您对我留学澳洲的支持和帮助。我是一名来自中国的学生，对于在澳洲继续深造有着强烈的渴望。在此我将阐述我留学的动机和目标，希望您能够给予我这个机会。
首先，我选择澳洲作为我的留学目的地，是因为澳洲拥有世界一流的教育体系和优质的教育资源。澳洲的大学在全球范围内享有盛誉，其教学质量和研究水平在许多领域处于领先地位。我相信在澳洲的学习经历将使我受益终身，并为我打下坚实的学术基础。
其次，我希望通过在澳洲的留学经历，拓宽自己的国际视野，并与来自不同国家和文化背景的学生交流。我相信这种多元文化的交流将使我更加开放和包容，培养出全球背景下的国际化思维能力。这对于我未来的职业发展将是至关重要的。
另外，我对于澳洲的专业发展机会也非常感兴趣。澳洲在许多领域都拥有独特的优势，如商业管理、工程、医学等。我希望能够在澳洲的大学中学习到最新的专业知识和技能，为将来在相关领域做出贡献做好准备。
最后，我相信澳洲留学将是我人生中的一次宝贵经历。我将会面临许多新的挑战和机遇，这将帮助我成长为一个更加独立和自信的人。我将努力适应新的学习环境和生活方式，并积极参与到澳洲的学术和社会活动中。
在此，我郑重承诺将遵守澳洲的法律法规，并尽力成为一名优秀的国际学生。我相信通过我的努力和澳洲大学的培养，我将能够取得优异的学业成绩，并为澳洲的教育事业做出贡献。
感谢您抽出时间阅读我的申请书。我真诚地希望能够获得您的支持和帮助，从而能够实现我的留学梦想。如果有任何需要补充或提供的材料，我将会及时提供。期待您的回复，并期待能够在澳洲开始我的留学之旅。
谨启
澳洲留学申请书 篇二：追求知识的新航程
尊敬的澳洲留学委员会：
我写信是希望能够获得您对我留学澳洲的支持和帮助。我是一名来自中国的学生，对于在澳洲继续深造有着强烈的渴望。在此我将阐述我留学的动机和目标，希望您能够给予我这个机会。
首先，我选择澳洲作为我的留学目的地，是因为澳洲拥有世界一流的教育体系和优质的教育资源。澳洲的大学在全球范围内享有盛誉，其教学质量和研究水平在许多领域处于领先地位。我相信在澳洲的学习经历将使我受益终身，并为我在相关领域的职业发展打下坚实的基础。
其次，我希望通过在澳洲的留学经历，拓宽自己的国际视野，并与来自不同国家和文化背景的学生交流。我相信这种多元文化的交流将使我更加开放和包容，培养出全球背景下的国际化思维能力。这对于我未来的职业发展将是至关重要的。
另外，我对于澳洲的专业发展机会也非常感兴趣。澳洲在许多领域都拥有独特的优势，如商业管理、工程、医学等。我希望能够在澳洲的大学中学习到最新的专业知识和技能，为将来在相关领域做出贡献做好准备。
最后，我相信澳洲留学将是我人生中的一次宝贵经历。我将会面临许多新的挑战和机遇，这将帮助我成长为一个更加独立和自信的人。我将努力适应新的学习环境和生活方式，并积极参与到澳洲的学术和社会活动中。
在此，我郑重承诺将遵守澳洲的法律法规，并尽力成为一名优秀的国际学生。我相信通过我的努力和澳洲大学的培养，我将能够取得优异的学业成绩，并为澳洲的教育事业做出贡献。
感谢您抽出时间阅读我的申请书。我真诚地希望能够获得您的支持和帮助，从而能够实现我的留学梦想。如果有任何需要补充或提供的材料，我将会及时提供。期待您的回复，并期待能够在澳洲开始我的留学之旅。
谨启
澳洲留学申请书 篇三
1、符合西方思维习惯
文化的差异导致东西方在什么是美德和优缺点的看法上不尽相同。在以往的经历中发现，有些留学申请人表达出来的“优点”实际上在西方看来是缺点，反映申请人对学术问题毫无主见;而有些申请人认为不好的东西恰恰是西方人所欣赏的，认为这些能表现出申请人充满个性。所以申请人要了解如何以西方的思维方式取舍你的申请素材，把有益的亮点有选择性地挑选出来，在适当地留学文书里展示出来。
2、突出重点，主线明确
澳洲留学申请文书写作中要清楚有力地表达您的求学动机，和学习学术能力。在国内有一种错误的观点，个人陈述要“煽情”才能有效果。有的留学申请人就通过描述不相干活动展示“独特”的性格，或是学术上感觉没有什么可写的，就写自己考试时克服了重重困难，如何考取了好成绩。这是根本不着边际的写法，会让录取者发掘不到你的特点。要知道，个人陈述是要在很短的时间内，清楚地用几百字告诉招生教授你是入学非常合格的人选，盲目“煽情”完全不需要。
千万别描述你如何地历尽劫难，别乱下结论，你不可能因为愤怒和苦难而脱颖而出。
3、结构简单
衔接紧密留学文书其实是你个人的广告。要重点突出，形象鲜明。仔细想想，留下深刻印象的广告哪个不是简明而富有创意的?许多申请人往往想把自己的全部优点都写出来告诉教授，觉得这样才能全面的展现自己。但是试想一下，招生教授天天都要做大量的教学工作，还要抽出时间阅读数量可观的留学申请资料，只有那种简单有力的文章才能让人印象深刻。
千万别对失败找借口，解释为什么没有成功。最重要的是写出你做了些什么来捱过挫败，然而，除了疾病的不可预见状况外，别为成绩不好或糟糕的学期找借口。如果可能，请着重解释个人挫败怎样赋予你新的态度，使得你坚定地走向成功。不要大肆渲染你的个人闪光点，只要着重在这种个人心迹揭示中写出前因后果即可。
澳洲留学申请书 篇四
Dear xxx,
The personal data enclosed in this application file will demonstrate myprofile as a child prodigy who entered into Jilin University at 16 and joinedthe country's topmost scientific research institution as a graduate student at20. Now with an engineering experience of 4 years at the age of 24, I would liketo scale still higher intellectual heights by pursuing advanced studies, aneducation process that I hope will gain me the competitive edge for personalgrowth and push me to the forefront of scientific progress.
Immersed in the academic atmosphere of an intellectual family, I wasencouraged in my early childhood by my parents to read books in a wide range ofdisciplines. With this privileged background, I attended primary school at 6, atleast one year earlier than the normal admission age of 7 or older. I felt solucky-God blessed me with so many natural gifts. At an early age I showed anatural talent in mathematics and a strong memory, the attributes that enabledme to excel my classmates, especially in such challenging subjects asmathematics, physics and chemistry. I took part in a variety of provincial andnational contests, demonstrating my excellent academic skills and wining manyprizes.
Blessed with my academic potence, I was able to finish my primary andsecondary education in 10 years, two years ahead of the usual twelve years. At16, I entered a privileged class specially designed for the gifted students atJilin University, a cradle of scientific and technological talents in China. Theclass selects only 90 students out of more than 1000 child prodigies acrossChina each year. (Jilin University is a prestigious university of generaleducation with 20 departments and a regular annual enrollment of 1,500 students)I studied at Electrical Engineering (E. E) Department, a highly selectivedepartment with a gathering of smart students who are hard to compete with.
Four years of undergraduate studies had me well trained in a wide range ofdisciplines, and my outstanding academic performance encouraged me to pursue anadvanced degree. With a concentration on mathematics, communication andcomputer, I studied a variety of courses in my undergraduate years, among whichwere Higher Mathematics, Probability Statistics and Stochastic Process, Theoriesof Signal and Information, High Frequency Circuits and Principles of ModernCommunications Systems, Computer Principle and other courses in the ElectronicTechnology field. I also studied Western culture, History and Economics in orderto build up a good base for my education. With a wish to build a solidfoundation for my future research and study, I was fully devoted to my academictraining at college. My hard work proved to be successful. My overall GPA of3.57/4.0 ranked in the top one percent of my class. Upon graduation in 1994, Iwon easy acceptance into Beijing University of Posts and Telecommunications as agraduate student at 20, an age when most Chinese students would be just startingtheir university education. At this university, I narrowed my academic interestdown to the area of mobile communications and digital communications.
My MA education proved to be another period of fruitful and successfulacademic pursuits. Among the courses I selected were Probability Theory, ISDN& ATM, SPC, Digital Signal Processing, Personal Communications, C++language. These disciplinary training prepared me to delve deeper in the studyof electrical engineering and communications. To keep me informed of the latestdevelopments in my field and to brush up my English language skills, I also readthe latest professional journals and periodicals of the telecommunications on aregular basis. Burning the course of my MA program, my outstanding academicrecords won me various scholarships in seven consecutive years, among which, toname a few, were Excellent Students, Excellent Person, Excellent fellowship.
To garnish this writing with other personal activities other than academicachievements, I need to mention my perfect performance in a dancing contest atJilin University, which won me the first prize.
Anyway, looking back at my campus life, I feel confident to say that I havefulfilled the education goal to my satisfaction.
Teaching ExperienceI worked as a teaching assistant at the ElectronicsCircuit Group in Personal Communications in my third semester at BeijingUniversity of Posts and Telecommunications. I taught product applications andthe telecommunications development in China. I trained the students bytheoretical approach and also taught them how to solve real problems bypractical means. I found the teaching position so much enjoyable. The dailyacademic exchanges between the students and myself were beneficial to bothparties. I believe that my students enjoyed my teaching too because my classeswere well attended.
Starting from April 1998, I worked as a part-time teacher at HPcorporation. Later I was also employed by Software Center Motorola, China. Itaught Motorola customers the principle of CDMA (Code Division Multiple Access)and the usage of the HP instruments for testing CDMA Base station and CDMAHandset. Motorola customers were all satisfied with my teaching. I not onlygrasped advanced knowledge but also, more importantly, learned how to be a goodteacher.
Research ExperienceIn the second year of my graduate studies, I began towork as research assistant of Professor Dacheng Yang, a renowned expert indigital and mobile communication Research and Design Center of Ministry of Postsand Telecommunications. After learning the background, application, principle,and advantage of CDMA, I selected the signaling design of the CDMA Base StationInterface as my research topic. I evaluated and studied the protocols IS-95,IS-634 and the ULTRA interface protocols of Lucent. Applying softwareengineering method and Oriented-Object approach, I designed the internalinterface of Base Station System between BSC and BTS-Abis interface, which isone of the most important parts of such a large and sophisticated project. Thenreferring to protocols LAPD/LAPF, integrating the latest knowledge and using onestep. By working on this project, I learned more about CDMA, GSM and othermobile communications systems. Later I felt so proud to hear what I had done wasdownloaded to the board and the design ran flawlessly.
Working ExperienceAfter I obtained my MA degree in engineering in 1997, Iwas employed by a telecommunication branch company of Posts &Telecommunications Industry Company. I participated in the JSU18 switchingSystem Project, which is planned to produce the sixth largest switching systemin China's own switching systems. I was in charge of the No.7 signaling sectionand developed the trunk communication system. Referring to protocol Q. 764, etc,I designed the TUP (Telephone User Part) & ISUP (ISDN User Part) - the mostimportant part of a switching system-with C++ Language. By now, I have finishedthe software flow of CPC (call process) of these two parts. Through programming,downloading the procedure into the real switching system, debugging and testing,I came to deeply understand the call process of the large switching system andthe relationship between all the modules of a large switching system. Theprocedure that I completed is so good that we can call successfully throughit.
In working on these two projects, I cultivated diligent work habits,independent research ability and team spirit. I feel I have the potential forfurther further academic growth and am ready to take up the challenge ofadvanced studies in my chosen field.
From August 1998, I joined Software center Motorola, China and got involvedin the CDMA project. We must communicate with international customers on afrequent basis in English environment. So I not only learned about the excellentsoftware development process and various branches of advanced knowledge, butalso improved my English ability. Here, we often exchange our findings atpresentations given by others and myself in English. I get a lot of technicaland non - technical training, in such subjects as Software Product Process, CDMA( Code Division Multiple Access), GSM, GPRS ( General Packet Radio Service - thethird generation system of GSM), TTCN ( Tree and Tabular Combined Notation - atest language), ITEX ( Interactive TTCN Editor and executor - a test tool forthe TTCN language), and even English language.
Purpose of StudyI learn greedily, but the more I am trained, the moredeeply I realize what I learned earlier is not enough. I have not got a chanceto lead a major project, although I have been moving on a smooth career path andalways finished my part of every project immaculately. As a female engineer, Imust learn more to compete with most male engineers to lead a major project. Andin spite of all my achievements, I feel that I have not brought my intellectualcapabilities into full play. So I desire to enter your esteemed university topursue advanced studies so that I can lay a solid foundation for my futureresearch work. In the meantime, I will be able to improve my English, and I hopethat someday I can speak English as well as Chinese.
I believe I have acquired the necessary theoretical framework and practicalexperience for advanced studies. Equipped with the ability to teach myself andconduct independent research, I will be able to attain competence quickly inareas that I may at first know very little about. I never work just to finish anassignment, but instead I always try conscientiously to learn as much aspossible and sharpen my expertise through the work I do. Keeping this workstyle, I have become highly skilled in such fields as switching system'strunking system (communications and software), Code Division Multiple Accesssystem (mobile communications and software), SDT & TTCN (CASE and testtools), and pSOS+ system (real-time operation system). These achievements wouldbe a great help in my pursuit of advanced education, especially when I can workunder the seasoned guidance of your strong faculty. My previous experience willqualify me for the TA and RA positions of your university as well.
I would like to apply to do graduate studies in the United States where theresearch and education in global telecommunications are leading the world. Ihave long admired your esteemed university known for its demanding work ethicsand nurturing academic atmosphere. I am confident that I can receive a highquality education on your PhD program. If I am accepted, I am also confidentthat I can make quick progress in the E. E field, especially in the areas ofwireless communication, communication, digital signal processing, thedisciplines that share many common characteristics and important principles.Given the broad applications of these technologies, I believe the progress wemake in these areas will help shape the future of the mankind. I would like tobe at the forefront of such progress. As I am well trained and broadlyexperienced in EE and computer science, you may find me more than qualified foradvanced studies in areas other than those I have mentioned. If so, I would begrateful to your appreciation and would like to hear any advice that you mayhave for me. Upon completion of the program, I will return to my homeland andstrive to make scientific contributions that both your university and I can beproud of.
Yours sincerely,
xxx
澳洲留学申请书 篇五
澳洲留学文书写作要点一、围绕中心突出重点
无论申请者选择怎样的事例，表达怎样的观点，首先都应考虑清楚，这些素材是否值得描述，与自己的申请目标、学术目标、职业目标甚至人生目标是否相关。
确定了主题及其支撑信息之后，申请者则需要重点反思这些事件对自己的影响以及自己对此的看法，切忌洋洋洒洒就事件本身长篇大论。问问自己想要通过文书向学校树立一个什么样的形象，找到一个合适的切入点，再一点一滴地把这个形象**起来。不赘言，不遗漏，围绕中心，突出重点，才能顺理成章。
澳洲留学文书写作要点二、简洁用词流畅行文
个人陈述的写作过程中应避免使用深奥晦涩的词汇，或引用并不具备广泛认知度的文章，尽量表达清楚、言简意赅，注意把握句子和段落之间自然、和谐的关系，并在要求的字数范围内完成。随后要检查是否有英文拼写或语法错误，但不必要在句式等方面反复纠结苛求。毕竟学校不会奢望学生的英文是完美无缺的。申请者所追求的应该是校方对文书逻辑性和合理性的一种认可。
澳洲留学文书写作要点三、诚恳认真不卑不亢
写作态度几乎决定了整篇文章的风格。一个成熟的申请者应该注意维护自己这些无形的品质。有硬伤(如GPA不高)的申请者可以适当为某些弱点做合理解释，条件较好者也不要表现得过分自信。没有必要对自己经历中的挫折讳莫如深，提及这些挫折的时候也不要表现出怀恨或者乞怜的负面情绪。
很多申请者自命不凡，没有特别突出的经历。或者有些申请者怨念自己写出来的文章没有让人眼前一亮的感觉。实际上，与其刻意追求这些虚无的东西，不如认真审视自己，坦诚地以分享的心态去叙述属于你个人的东西，就能让人产生共鸣。以真实为第一原则，必要时可以将有些内容适度调整或夸大，但要注意技巧，千万不能失真。
澳洲留学文书写作要点四、了解对象有的放矢
个人陈述是写给录取委员会的教授们看的，不同的学校有不同的情况，应该在写之前先研究透彻，有针对性地去阐述，这样才能合理地说明自己为什么要选择这个学校、这个专业，提出自己符合录取标准的观点才能令人信服，对自己将来学术前景和职业前景的展望才能让人觉得合情合理。 澳洲留学文书写作要点五、适当表达学术深度
这个原则被排序到最后是有原因的。例如去澳洲留学生活商科申请的特殊性，如果申请者盲目地阐述或评价一些理论观点，而这与很多录取委员会中来自该领域的资深老手并不在一个认识层面上，很有可能弄巧成拙或者达不到自己预期的目标。所以建议澳大利亚留学申请者谨慎使用。当然，适当介绍自己参与过的研究项目(包括课题的意义、自己所承担的具体工作及心得体会等)、表明自己将来的专业方向以及希望得到某位特定教授的指点还是可取的。
文化的差异导致东西方在什么是美德和优缺点的看法上不尽相同。在以往的经历中发现，有些留学申请人表达出来的“优点”实际上在西方看来是缺点，反映申请人对学术问题毫无主见;而有些申请人认为不好的东西恰恰是西方人所欣赏的，认为这些能表现出申请人充满个性。所以申请人要了解如何以西方的思维方式取舍你的申请素材，把有益的亮点有选择性地挑选出来，在适当地篇幅里展示出来。
澳洲留学申请书 篇六
1.澳洲大学的录取方式和标准与咱们国内有很大不同。
国内升学，从小学、初中、高中到大学、研究生、博士，每上一个台阶都要经过相关部门的严格考试。所谓“千军万马过独木桥”，说的就是这种情况。反观澳洲大学，并没有入学考试，因此申请文件就显得格外重要。它们往往是澳洲大学教授了解你学习经历、性格品质、工作经验和专业水平的惟一媒介和手段。
2.在吸引教授眼球和争取录取上，申请材料的优劣与各种考试成绩同等重要。
许多申请人花费大量的时间和金钱来准备各种考试，以为拿到高分就万事大吉了，其实不然。理想的托福、雅思成绩只不过是对你语言运用能力的一种体现，能在申请材料中起到锦上添花的作用，但它不能反映出一个人的专业素质和才干，而这些恰恰正是教授急于了解的。
3.一份漂亮的申请材料能够充分展示你的优势
体现你的成就、抱负和个人品德，能够弥补你大学成绩、工作经验甚至是学历的不足，令你在众多申请者中脱颖而出，尽快拿到通知书，大大加快留学进程。
